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Really man, really? Do you have anything in common with the protagonist? Anyway, it was a very funny story, with a very interesting plot twist at the end. The only thing is, it might benefit from a little bit of lengthening of the rising action, and I was still a bit confused at the end. Anyway, other than that and potentially a few grammar mistakes (Don't ask me what they are, because I'm rubbish with grammar.), you're good to go. Also, I need some clarification: was he a werewolf trying to become a werecoyote, or a human who turned into a coyote and hated it, or a coyote who hates what he has become?
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JoeyLiverwurst Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He was a werewolf all along but hated it and wanted to be a werecoyote.

I don't think I have much in common with him. I don't get what's so bad about being a werewolf. I started out thinking he was a whiny brat, though, and by the end felt really sorry for him.
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